In the post before this are some more recent student writings. We have been working on writing paragraphs from a prompt for several weeks. These paragraphs are revised and edited by the students and their peers (so there might still be some errors). A few students writings will be posted in a later blog when they are complete.
Minions by Ciara
On Monday when I woke up called my minions to make me breakfast. After they will pick my clothes out. Next they picked me up and brought me into the living room to watch TV. Also they will go get me ice cream . They will do my homework. Then I will order my minions to pack my backpack . On Friday I was have them bring me to school and we will goodbye.
Emily’s Sad Loom Bands
By Emily Webb
Dear Emily, its your loom bands. we are VERY frustrated with you because you always leave us on the floor and never bother to pick us up! We would really enjoy if you can pick us up instead of cleaning us up with the vacuum.
Please do not leave us on the dirty floor EVER AGAIN! PLEASE pick us up instead of being LAZY! we are very sad. ( HELP US)
We try to tell you but you don’t listen to us EVER so we wrote this note to you we hope you will understand
From your very sad Loom Bands.
To Noah i'm tired of face planting into the puck it does not feel good. I know i'm your favorite stick but give me a break you also give me carpet burn. Please use a different stick.
from your favorite stick
I Need A GERMAN SHEPHERD PUPPY MIX
Her name will be Kayla she will also be black white or both. she will be a skinny, athletic, fluffy, strong, fast, and brave. She will be large in height when she is older of course. she mite be a k9 cop or sled dog when she is older. I will trane here and my other dogs Toby and hunter to be a sled dog. Kayla will be our leader as well. Kayla will be a fun, amazing dog and a good friend.
Hey Josh it’s keyboard.I am so happy I am not connected to the computer. I am so tired of being used all of the time. It was fun once but not really now. It hurts a whole lot. if you can give me a break it would really nice.
If I had minions for one week I would do lots of things with them.I would have them go get ABBIE W. then we would PARTY!!!!!!!!Their would be thousands of minions so many that I can’t count. Abbie and I would have them go get a trampoline so we could jump as long as we can. While Abbie and I play the minions would do all of our chores and our HOMEWORK we DON’T like HOMEWORK. The minions would buy US a BIG FLUFFY UNICORN!!!!!!!! Abbie me and the minions would PARTY all NIGHT!! All of us would go outside and PLAY with the FREEZE RAY GUN!!!!!! Next Abbie and I would SHOOT the MINIONS out of a CANON!!!!! The MINIONS would do anything that WE WANTED. ABBIE and I would play with the FART GUN and EVERYONE would PASS out because it SMELLED so BAD!! Thats what I would do with my MINIONS if I had them for a week!!!!!!
It’s your pencil. We need to talk about something. Look at me, I need to be sharpened! All my fancy friends are in the pencil case safe and sound. I HATE being face planted into paper! PLEASE use one of my friends!! It’s not fair! I’m the only one that gets left behind. Please can you sharpen me.
The Crayon’s Letter by Abigail
We gotta talk were not getting any younger in this dum crayon box you know. All of us are becoming desprate to get out of your pencil box. We feel this way because now you only use those mean markers who think their the best and blah blah blah. Why do you only you now only use markers? WHY!?!?!? You can’t just use markers! Every child or adult has to keep their art supplies on balance. No one including YOU can use markers and then keep on using them over and over again in the same ORDER! It’s not aloud in the art world. We will have our strongest crayons and colored pencils come and get the markers and force them to leave your classroom! Seriously we can do that!
If you keep on using markers our amazingly wrote letters we will have to go a little and ignoring too FAR! All of us will come and kidnap your Jump Rope for Heart DUCKS! ha! ha! ha! We will do that! Okay were sorry for saying that but we just want to be used again how would you feel if you were locked in a dark crayon box for months and months please forgive us for threatening you just please use us again.
your sad and sorry crayons.
I, am a ball of yarn. I used to sit in a small basket in a store. I was never bought, because all of you mean humans say I’m an ugly shade of yellow. It was always calm, but that was before. One day a human actually bought me, and I thought “yay,”, but I thought too soon. THE HUMANS GAVE ME TO A CAT!! I HATE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Scratching and biting all day. Being a ball of yarn is no fun. # :(
My Super Cute Ideal Pet!!!
My super cute ideal pet is a French Bulldog because their sweet and really cute! French Bulldogs are the perfect dogs for me. I know cause they have all the qualities I like.
A French Bulldog is organic. Which means it can only have some foods. They can even eat apples! But if by accident they eat somthing thats not organic so many bad things could happen to the dog! ( Poor Dog!)
French Bulldogs are really sweet and super tiny! The best qualities they have are they always listen to their owners Which to me is great cause if I tell them to do something for some awesome reason they do it! ( These are some awesome dogs!)
They are never mean and they like kids alot. Its a good thing they like kids cause I have a lot of siblings. One of a French Bulldogs favorite things to do is either take a walk in the park or take a long car ride with the window open. ( They think its fun!)
French Bulldogs come in so many different colors black, brown, white, mix. The colors make them look so cute! ( White is the best color for them!)
That Is My Super Cute Ideal Pet!!!
My Dream Car by Kody
My dream car is a truck. It is a raised up truck that is blue and it is really fast. It feels really smooth and it is really nice. The truck smells like gas. It makes a really loud rumble sound. I love my truck it is cool.
My Favorite Store by Nick
MY favorite store is Cumberland farms. because I walk in and I smell coffee. I see lots of foods and drinks. Then I go to the hot beverage station. Next I get hot chocolate. Then finally I go get something to eat.
Controller Sticky Keys
You have a problem that I have a problem with. You eat and play video games at the same time. It’s really annoying. You are getting my bottoms dirty and they get stuck. You should try to eat before you play with me. It would be really helpful if you tried to keep me clean.
Your dear friend,
The Ball of Yarn
I am a ball of blue yarn. One day I was just sitting in my basket with red yarn and yellow yarn. When Mr. Kitty Man came along and snatched me up. Then he rolled me across the floor. He pounced on me, and he bit me. And he scratched me with his claws.Then Bill a 5 year old, picked Mr. Kitty up and crushed him in a hug. He said ‘’Yay Mr. Kitty Man’’ and Mr.Kitty was never seen again.
My house is a really cool place! It has 4 houses in one.In the backyard, there is a workshop, a barn, a play area, a place in front of the shop for big stuff, a firepit, an emergencey and beaver pond, a woods, an awesome driveway, and much more. I love my house!