Hello families! Below you will find our first published writing pieces. Our focus for writing has been to write a complete paragraph consisting of a topic sentence, 3 or more detail sentences and a concluding sentence. We have also been working on including 5 senses details, and transition and linking words to improve our writing for our readers. We did revise and edit these pieces however there may be some errors that we missed or were accidentally typed in. Although most students are fairly proficient in navigating a computer, typing a story is a whole different skill set! Please enjoy our writing and feel free to leave a comment!
I was nervous on the first day of school. When I walked into the classroom all of the kids looked. Then the teacher said, “hello.” In the end I was feeling happy and not nervous.I was happy to join the class.
Two years ago I went to a witch dungeon in Boston Massachusetts. I went down some of the creakiest stairs ever .There were mannequins all over behind rusty jail cells and wet drippy ceilings. Men were popping out saying “BOO BOO BOO”...fr..ea...ky. I screamed and screamed more . I hugged my mom. Then my daddy and his friend John said, “BOO BOO BOO BOO.” I yelled! It stopped the whole group. My mom was at the front and Ii jumped on a mannequin and yelled more Truly, that's why I am scared to go back.
I remember the time when I got my cat Dutchess. My cat Dutchess is a good pet. She is the best cat to me. She is nice because she puts her nose on my nose. She eats a lot of cat food. Finally I’m so happy we rescued her.
My Dance Recital
When I had my dance recital, I had a great time dancing. First I got into my beautiful costume. It was a little uncomfortable but when I spun around, I looked like a sparkly, shimmering snowflake.When I danced I was a little nervous because I was dancing in front of 800 people. Also, I had to practice a lot to learn all the dance moves correctly.At the end, I finished dancing and when I left I got a free water bottle.I had a great time.
When it was the first day of school I was feeling very,very nervovs because it was the first day of 3 grade.As Tytan and I got on the bus I sat with Arora and I sat near Shayla and as I rood to school I said to my self;so far so good.I walked into the class room.I was the first one in the class room.As soon as the school day began I saw a lot of my friends.I thought this, “Maybe today won’t be so bad after all.” As soon as the school day was over I went to the multipurpose room.I thought to myself, “ after that school day,I can not wait till tomorrow.”
I like swimming at my grandma’s house. Behind my grandma’s house there is a creek. There is a cliff and I jump off of it. I did it two times. It was so awesome swimming at grandma’s house.
First we went on the airbus.Next we went to dinner. After that we went to my friends. Finally, we got to the airbus.I love going on the airbus.
One day I did something special with my Uncle Vinny and Ms.Fox. First, we drove to the apple farm. .Then we picked apples. It was exciting. Later, we got apple cider donuts. It was a great day.
Daddy coming home to my house after being gone for 4 days. First I notice the light on car coming up the driveway.Second I go to the mudroom and wait for him.Third daddy comes to dinner.After dinner daddy prays to me and said “goodnight!”I always look forward to daddy coming home!
When I first saw my bunny, Daisy I was amazed..She looked me in the eyes. On the ride home, she laid on my lap. S he was so pretty. she has tall ears, is very fluffy and looks like a lion.Honey and Daisy are twins like me.So I never forgot that first time when I saw my rabbit and I love her.
My best soccer game was on a Sunday. We always practice before the game. I like to practice because it gets you ready for the game.One guy pushed me in the goalies’ box . The ref gave me a penalty kick. I scored! It went right over the goalie's head. Next my friend Ella Mulholland and Lucas scored too.We were playing against RipVanWinkle. We scored so many goals .We won the game! It was amazing.
My trip to the Bronx Zoo was exciting. We went to see all of the mammals. Then we saw all reptiles.We also got my picture taken with a baby kangaroo.At the end we walked to the Bronx Zoo store to get me and Gage a treat for our behaver on the trip.
I will never forget the day I got Lego Mr. Gold. I opened a little bag and I didn’t know what it was. Next, I played with him. All in all, my day with Mr.Gold was great.
I’ll never forget the day I made my sister laugh for the first time. First, I sang her a song. Then she started crying and I couldn’t get her to stop. I put the pacifier in her mouth and she spit it out. She did it again like a little game. In the end, she stopped crying and I made her laugh.